The Canuck Werewolf - Marisa Chenery Overall, I'd say this felt more like a rough draft then a full story... It has the potential to be really good though.... The characters need to be fleshed out, we'd need a lot more world building, and just more overall story and it could be the beginning af a really enjoyable series :)On a side note, there was one minor irritation - all the characters seem younger then they're described as.... The heroine doesn't seem like a 24 year old , but more like a 19 or 20 y.o, and her brother and his friends who are supposed to be 19 act more like high school freshmen then college aged ones....But like I said, for such a short story it isn't a bad way to spend an hour.